Here is Part 3 of the Evil Lurks Within Us. To check out the first 2 parts of this story click, Part 1 and Part 2.
“Susan, could you please take me to see the lawyer tomorrow?”
My nurse, Susan, got that exasperated look on her face again. This was becoming a real issue.
“Mary, I don’t think tomorrow is a good day.”
“But Susan when will you take me?”
“Look Mary it is not like the world will end in three days. Soon, ok?”
“The world as I know it can’t end soon enough!”
Tessa
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About Tessa
Teresa (Tessa) Smeigh at 60 plus is still going strong despite her disabilities affecting both physical and mental abilities. She has bipolar disorder (mental), Fibromyalgia (nerves), degenerative disc disease (spine), and arthritis (joints). Her new journey's include Diabetes controlled by insulin. She is also working on 2 fiction books (mysteries). The books will probably never be finished. She keeps her blog filled with useful content, occasional devotionals (She is a Christian), stories and poems. Plenty to keep you busy. She has also been interviewed by blogs and had other posts published on many different blogs. She is from Southern, NJ. Her family and blog keep her busy.
I like this a lot. Very good.
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Thank you for stopping by! I am glad that you liked it. Trying to use the prompts to write a story is much harder, but great experience.
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I think she needs a new nurse! Is the attorney for her defense after she kills Tom?
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Thank you for reading Janna! I still haven’t decided how she is going to get her freedom from Tom — the more traditional way by divorce or his death! 🙂
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this is short and right. I liked it too.
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Thank you Ruby! These prompts are helping me learn to express things in fewer words and without all the descriptive sentences we usually put in pieces. A real challenge! Thank you for reading!
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Boy howdy, have I felt like that. I love the tone of your piece.
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Thanks Brenda! My head is swimming with ideas! Thank you for reading!
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Thanks so much for linking up with Trifecta this week. I enjoyed this piece, and I also enjoyed the comments. “Boy howdy” is rather awesome. But so is hearing you say that you’re feeling challenged and that your head is swimming. That’s so good to hear. This is a really nice take on the prompt. Tight and clear. Hope to see you back soon.
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Thank you! Definitely challenging, lots of ideas, not sure where it will take me next and the deadlines are actually good for me. Thank you so much for reading!
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