Evil Lurks Within Us – Part 3

Here is Part 3 of the Evil Lurks Within Us. To check out the first 2 parts of this story click,  Part 1 and Part 2.

“Susan, could you please take me to see the lawyer tomorrow?”

My nurse, Susan, got that exasperated look on her face again. This was becoming a real issue.

“Mary, I don’t think tomorrow is a good day.”

“But Susan when will you take me?”

“Look Mary it is not like the world will end in three days. Soon, ok?”

“The world as I know it can’t end soon enough!”


About Tessa

Tessa Dean at 60 plus is still writing but slowing down because of her disabilities affecting both physical and mental abilities. She has bipolar disorder (mental), Fibromyalgia (nerves), degenerative disc disease (spine), and arthritis (joints). She has published about 12 articles on Bipolar Disorder on www.IBPF.net. She is also working on 3 fiction books (mysteries/thrillers). The books will probably never be finished, but who knows what the future holds. She keeps her blogs filled with useful content, stories and poems. Plenty to keep you busy. She has also been interviewed by blogs and had other posts published on many different blogs. She is from Southern, NJ. Her family, writing and blog keep her busy. You can also follow the progress of her memoirs on the blog. She is adding chapters a little at a time.
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10 Responses to Evil Lurks Within Us – Part 3

  1. I like this a lot. Very good.


  2. jannatwrites says:

    I think she needs a new nurse! Is the attorney for her defense after she kills Tom?


    • Tessa says:

      Thank you for reading Janna! I still haven’t decided how she is going to get her freedom from Tom — the more traditional way by divorce or his death! 🙂


  3. this is short and right. I liked it too.


    • Tessa says:

      Thank you Ruby! These prompts are helping me learn to express things in fewer words and without all the descriptive sentences we usually put in pieces. A real challenge! Thank you for reading!


  4. brenda w says:

    Boy howdy, have I felt like that. I love the tone of your piece.


  5. Thanks so much for linking up with Trifecta this week. I enjoyed this piece, and I also enjoyed the comments. “Boy howdy” is rather awesome. But so is hearing you say that you’re feeling challenged and that your head is swimming. That’s so good to hear. This is a really nice take on the prompt. Tight and clear. Hope to see you back soon.


    • Tessa says:

      Thank you! Definitely challenging, lots of ideas, not sure where it will take me next and the deadlines are actually good for me. Thank you so much for reading!


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