Fun Land!

This is a short story for Rochelle Wisoff-Fields “Friday Fictioneers” which is a 100 word fiction piece on the photo promt.



PHOTO PROMPT © Dee Lovering

PHOTO PROMPT © Dee Lovering

Fun Land is so much better on sunny days, but the kids were having fun throwing snowballs and riding the rides that were offered.

There was a souvenir booth and Rodney and Randy were headed there. They had money and wanted to spend it.

To get over there they had to pass the rails where the little train ran. They were so busy throwing snowballs as they ran, they didn’t notice the train until it hit them. They didn’t hear the screams.

The parents hadn’t accompanied them and the teachers had to inform the parents of the accident. Both dead!


This is my first fiction piece in quite a while and I am not exactly happy with it, but with so little time it will have to do.

About Tessa

Teresa (Tessa) Smeigh at 60 plus is still going strong despite her disabilities affecting both physical and mental abilities. She has bipolar disorder (mental), Fibromyalgia (nerves), degenerative disc disease (spine), and arthritis (joints). Her new journey's include Diabetes controlled by insulin. She is also working on 2 fiction books (mysteries). The books will probably never be finished. She keeps her blog filled with useful content, occasional devotionals (She is a Christian), stories and poems. Plenty to keep you busy. She has also been interviewed by blogs and had other posts published on many different blogs. She is from Southern, NJ. Her family and blog keep her busy.
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16 Responses to Fun Land!

  1. Kalpana Solsi says:

    Wits so sad for the parents to get the sad news of their kids.


  2. Dina Farmer says:

    Really short and sweet! I loved this!


  3. A story in 100 words or less is intriguing!


  4. gahlearner says:

    That’s so sad. Good story.


  5. Dale says:

    Oh I so feared you would go there when I read the word “rail”!
    A parent’s worst nightmare!


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