Hide and Seek –FFfAW – Week of 08-04 thru 08-10-2015 – photo prompt

Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers

Week of 08-04-2015 through 08-10-2015

This week's photo prompt is provided by Louise with “The Storyteller's Abode.”

Hide and Seek by Teresa Dean Smeigh 2015

“Ready or not here I come!”

There was silence all around Jenny. She looked around the trees and bushes around her by she didn’t see a bit of movement.

“Timmy, Tommy come out please.”

Silence. Where could they have gone?

She looked off into the distance where 2 huge rocks were standing out on the open fields next door. She saw a cowboy heading towards her.

“What are you boys doing?” the angry man asked.

Two little figures came out from behind the stones. “We’re sorry,” they squeaked.
Jenny ran towards them.

“I am sorry for the trouble they caused.”

“And you would be?”

“Jenny Foster.”

“She’s our nanny,” Tommy said.

“Well Jenny, what do you think the punishment should be for trespassing?”

“Uhhh,” Jenny stammered. The boys hid behind her.

“I think Jenny should have dinner with me tonight.”

“I, uh,” she looked at the handsome cowboy.

“Go Jenny, we don’t want a spanking,” they chorused.

“What’s your name”

“John Barker.”

“The John Barker?”

“None other!”

“Oh, yes.”

Guide for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writer Challenge

1. A prompt photo will be provided each Tuesday to be used as a base to your story. Please include photo prompt with your story.

2. Linking for this challenge begins on Tuesday and runs to the following Tuesday.

3. Please credit photo to photographer

4. The story word limit is 100 – 150 words (+ – 25 words). Please try and stay within this limit.

5. Pingback to the challenge post in your story’s post.

6. This is a flash fiction challenge (stories in 100-175 words or less) and each story should have a beginning, a middle, and an end. Therefore, no serial (continuation) stories. They become too complicated for our readers.

7. Add your story to the InLinkz Link-up (Blue Froggy button). If you need link-up instructions, please email me at mepricelessjoy@gmail.com.

About Tessa

Teresa (Tessa) Smeigh at 60 plus is still going strong despite her disabilities affecting both physical and mental abilities. She has bipolar disorder (mental), Fibromyalgia (nerves), degenerative disc disease (spine), and arthritis (joints). Her new journey's include Diabetes controlled by insulin. She is also working on 2 fiction books (mysteries). The books will probably never be finished. She keeps her blog filled with useful content, occasional devotionals (She is a Christian), stories and poems. Plenty to keep you busy. She has also been interviewed by blogs and had other posts published on many different blogs. She is from Southern, NJ. Her family and blog keep her busy.
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24 Responses to Hide and Seek –FFfAW – Week of 08-04 thru 08-10-2015 – photo prompt

  1. Great story! “The” John Barker? LOL! Her little hide and seek game may have started a love affair. Thank you so much for participating in Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers Challenge!


  2. afairymind says:

    Very sweet! I looks like there might be love in the air.:)


  3. naturelover says:

    I hope she’d have a wonderful dinner!


  4. Ameena k.g says:

    This is a beautiful love story. Haha, loved reading it 🙂


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  7. did you start this once before?

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