Hidey Hole – writing prompt

Hidey Hole

by Teresa Dean Smeigh copyright August 2015

I see absolutely everything.”

“Let me see, let me see!” Pop pushes Billy trying to get in to see closer.

“Patience Pop, let me get the angle just right so we get the best view.”

“Let ME see, Billy,” pop almost shouts in his haste.

“Sshh Pop, someone may come in and hear us. You’ll get your turn soon.”

A door bangs and both men jump guiltily away from the little hole they drilled to make a peep-hole through the wooden deer’s eye.

Agnes rushes out and hugs both men to her. “You guys did a lovely job hanging the deer in the Ladies Room. I just love it!”

“May I use the Ladies Room?” a sweet voice asks.

Agnes says,”Of course dearie, let me show you where it is.”

She leads her off and both men fight over who gets to watch first.


About Tessa

Tessa Dean at 60 plus is still writing but slowing down because of her disabilities affecting both physical and mental abilities. She has bipolar disorder (mental), Fibromyalgia (nerves), degenerative disc disease (spine), and arthritis (joints). She has published about 12 articles on Bipolar Disorder on www.IBPF.net. She is also working on 3 fiction books (mysteries/thrillers). The books will probably never be finished, but who knows what the future holds. She keeps her blogs filled with useful content, stories and poems. Plenty to keep you busy. She has also been interviewed by blogs and had other posts published on many different blogs. She is from Southern, NJ. Her family, writing and blog keep her busy. You can also follow the progress of her memoirs on the blog. She is adding chapters a little at a time.
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17 Responses to Hidey Hole – writing prompt

  1. Sonya says:

    I hope Agnes finds out soon why they were so keen to help her, the creeps…


  2. Colline says:

    One hopes that they eventually get caught!


  3. Creepy is the operative word here. Well told!


  4. luckyjc007 says:

    Oh! Through the eyes of a deer! Who knew? 🙂


  5. What dirtbags! Great story as it shows the worst in people. Thank goodness they aren’t all like this.


  6. babso2you says:

    Teresa – you had me laughing here with this one! Never thought of a story with peeping Tom’s when I wrote that opening line. 🙂 Thank you for writing for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge and be well…. ^..^


  7. Ah… a most disgusting ulterior motive to help…. creepy, indeed. Clever use of the prompt!


  8. tnkerr says:

    One of the things I enjoy about participating in challenges like this is the variety and different perspectives that emerge in the stories. This is great!


  9. afairymind says:

    What creeps! I hope Agnes works out what they’re up to soon!

    Liked by 1 person

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