Ronovan Writes Weekly Haiku Poetry Challenge
Tide & Flesh
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The Waves
By Teresa Dean Smeigh
Copyright September 2015
Flesh lying on sand,
The tide rolls over bodies
Pulls them out to sea.
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- Take the two words and write a Haiku. I use Haiku in English as my style, which is 5 syllables for the first line, 7 for the second, and 5 for the third, but you can use what you like. For syllable help visit HowManySyllables.com.
- The two words can be used as you like. Words have different definitions and you can use the definitions you like. You can even use a synonym word as long as it does not change the meaning. Go to Thesaurus.com for Synonym help.
- Copy the link of your finished haiku URL in a comment so we can all go and visit your site to see what you have done. I will comment on your site. You can do a ping back. What’s a ping back? Put a link back to this prompt page, if you like within your post, as long as it does not take away from your haiku. This is simply a prompt and challenge to encourage people to try Haiku and give some a prompt and a place to share in comments so we can find each other. A link in your post does give others a chance to find us and join in. Use one of the two below if you like.
- Ping back Link https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2015/09/28/ronovanwrites-weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-64-tide-flesh/
- Non Ping back Link https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/category/haiku-prompt-challenge/
- You may copy one of the badges/images appearing in this post below or above and place it on your site if you wish, most normally use it within their post. I am not saying you need to, but if you would like to do so then go ahead. It is simply my way of saying thank you for participating. I sometimes make custom images for the week, if time and health permits.
- The Challenge is currently posted at 8 AM New York City time on Mondays to give people a better chance than the old 9 AM time.
- Deadline is Noon New York City time on the Sunday following the Challenge Post release.
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The waves want everything, but later give them back to shore. Nice haiku!
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Thank you! And yes the waves will take and give back. Eww!
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Ah, but when they give them back they will at times be part of the sand. I sometimes think of what sand is made of and get all grossed out. 🙂 Thank you so much for joining. 🙂 And for kind of ooking me out. (That’s how i spell it anyway.) 😉
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Now you made me thing about what’s in the sand. Ick! I thank you for the welcome. Sorry I ooked you out.
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🙂
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Welcome to the wonderful world of Ronovan’s Haiku challenges. I liked yours very much. It is important to let you know how very much you are appreciated! ❤
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Well thank you. I am glad you liked it. It is nice to be appreciated.
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What a great Haiku, You lot have put me off sand now!!!!! 🙂
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Thank you. I understand your feelings about sand now. I never thought about before now. LOL!
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Very imaginative haiku Tessa.
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Thank you for the comments. I love Haiu’s and I even do the 3 word Wedesday with 3 words in a haiku. Even harder to do, but I love it.
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Nice visual haiku! Tessa my pal from story writing group, now my haiku mate.
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Thank you. Glad to see you again. I love Haiku’s.
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heh, heh and then the creature in my poem eats them…..
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Yummy LOL! Thanks for reading.!
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Lovely poem. The best time for me is when I’m near a sandy beach, for real or in my mind. Welcome!
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Thank you for reading and the welcome and I am glad you love it.
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