Misty Endings – Writing 101, Day 13: Play with word count

This story was originally over 100 words. I cut it down once for another site to 100 words and I just cut it down to a 50 word story.

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Misty Endings

By Teresa Dean Smeigh

copyright November 2015

Heather can barely see through the fog. She stops, hides behind a tree and hears nothing. Maybe he has given up chasing her.

The tug on her ponytail pulls her head back exposing her throat. She looks into his face and has only a moment to realize it is over.

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About Tessa

Teresa (Tessa) Smeigh is now in her 60's and still going strong despite her disabilities affecting both physical and mental abilities. She has bipolar disorder (mental), Fibromyalgia (nerves), degenerative disc disease (spine), and arthritis (joints). Despite that she is active in Mental Health Advocating, writing for www.IBPF.org (volunteer for non-profit) and has 5 blog posts already published by them. She is also working on 2 fiction books (mysteries). She keeps her blog filled with useful content, daily devotionals (She is a Christian), stories and poems. Plenty to keep you busy. She has also been interviewed by blogs and had other posts published on many different blogs. She has 3 blogs so far http://www.tessacandoit.com and http://www.finallyawriter.com and http://www.sunnythoughtsandprayers.wordpress.com She is from Deptford, NJ. Her family and blogs keep her busy.
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4 Responses to Misty Endings – Writing 101, Day 13: Play with word count

  1. Susan says:

    Good job. I like it. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Wandering Soul says:

    Hope it’s just two kids playing hide and seek. 😦 refuse to go in the direction of the most obvious conclusion that comes to mind first!

    Like

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