FRIDAY FICTION with RONOVAN WRITES Prompt Challenge #7 – Judy and John – The Newborn

FRIDAY FICTION with RONOVAN WRITES Prompt Challenge #7

Friday Fiction with Ronovan

Part 1 is John and Judy.

Part 2 is The Honeymoon

Part 3 is The Flight

Part 4 is The Hospital Under Siege

Part 5 is Love me Tender

Part 6 is Thanksgiving Dinner

Part 7 is The Newborn

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Fluffy the Cat

Fluffy the Cat

Judy and John – Part 7 – The Newborn

– by Teresa Smeigh Dec 2015

Joan was racing behind the ambulance trying to keep up. Just then Fluffy, Judy’s cat, jumped in Joan’s lap. Joan swerved, hit a piece of ice and slid over the road and crashed into the ambulance which came to a halt.

The toy dog they had gotten for the new baby came flying into the front seat too. Where had Fluffy been all this time? She saw him slide through a small hole beside the seat and into the trunk.

Fluffy had pulled the little stuffed dog into the back seat and then jumped into Joan’s lap looking for Judy. She smelled her and the new baby. She was disturbed and wanted to assert her ownership of Judy.

John came running back and said, “The ambulance is out of service. How about the car?”

“Hurry John, his breathing is slowing down,” Judy screamed, newly revived and found they had been in an accident.

Joan’s car was alright so everyone moved back into it. Joan, Judy who was cuddling her baby for now and the EMT who was working on the baby’s breathing were in the front seat and the other technician, the driver, and John sat in the back.

Joan took off and sped down the road paying more attention to the ice slicks. They arrived at the hospital emergency room and out of the banged up car come a recently pregnant mother, her mother holding her up and the EMT holding the baby now.

Followed by the father, the ambulance driver, and Fluffy the cat dragging the little stuffed dog in its mouth.

They were rushing in and wondered why all the laughter. They hadn’t seen the cat trailing behind.

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Constructive Criticism is appreciated as always.

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About Tessa

Teresa (Tessa) Smeigh is now in her 60's and still going strong despite her disabilities affecting both physical and mental abilities. She has bipolar disorder (mental), Fibromyalgia (nerves), degenerative disc disease (spine), and arthritis (joints). Despite that she is active in Mental Health Advocating, writing for www.IBPF.org (volunteer for non-profit) and has 5 blog posts already published by them. She is also working on 2 fiction books (mysteries). She keeps her blog filled with useful content, daily devotionals (She is a Christian), stories and poems. Plenty to keep you busy. She has also been interviewed by blogs and had other posts published on many different blogs. She has 3 blogs so far http://www.tessacandoit.com and http://www.finallyawriter.com and http://www.sunnythoughtsandprayers.wordpress.com She is from Deptford, NJ. Her family and blogs keep her busy.
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7 Responses to FRIDAY FICTION with RONOVAN WRITES Prompt Challenge #7 – Judy and John – The Newborn

  1. Beautiful. I’ll be back to read again.

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    • Tessa says:

      Thank you. I was going to go another way with my story, but it had to be humorous and use 3 of a bunch of words so I had to change my story line. This isn’t easy to do, but fun.

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  2. I enjoyed your chapter very much. I could see the picture clearly in my mind(very descriptive as they say) The idea of Fluffy pulling along the stuffed dog! Excellent

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  5. Ritu says:

    This is a great little twist within your series, and yes, funny!

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