FRIDAY FICTION with RONOVAN WRITES Prompt Challenge #11 – Judy and John – “Teenage Lobotomy” by The Ramones
Part 1 is John and Judy.
Part 2 is The Honeymoon
Part 3 is The Flight
Part 4 is The Hospital Under Siege
Part 5 is Love me Tender
Part 6 is Thanksgiving Dinner
Part 7 is The Newborn
Part 8 is Recovery From Birth
Part 9 is The Lesson
Part 10 is Surprise
Part 11 is “Teenage Lobotomy” by the Ramones
“Judy and John – Teenage Lobotomy , by the Ramones”
by Teresa Smeigh January 2016
“Lobotomy, lobotomy, lobotomy, lobotomy!
DDT did a job on me
Now I am a real sickie
Guess I’ll have to break the news
That I have no mind to lose
All the girls are in love with me
I’m a teenage lobotomy.”
“What is that Gina asked?”
“Mine and Johnny’s favorite song. We love The Ramones.”
“Is that Johnny?” Cindy asked.
“I am pretty sure it is and that means he has come for us. Get ready to move.”
“But we’re locked in Judy,” Cindy mentioned.
“I figured that out and so must have he.”
The girls huddled away from the door. There weren’t any windows so they couldn’t see much. There was a crash against the door and then it moved a little. Another crash and the door busted in. Some jail.
“Quick, we got them drunk and then I sung and hoped you heard me Judy. We have to move. They are not on our side. They want Boaz and don’t care about Michael. They were using us to lead them to the camp. They took the women hoping we would fall in line. Luckily they like their wine.”
Gina’s man, Carl, took her arm and started leading her off. John told the girls to leave his arms free to fire if necessary. Just follow Carl.
“Where are we going?”
“We found a cave to huddle in and make plans. I need you girls to stay in the cave and keep the pilot quiet. He got hurt in the crash. We found you some guns and Warrior as protection and some first aid equipment. You girls aren’t hurt are you?”
“No they didn’t touch us, just locked us up.
Constructive Criticism welcome!