FRIDAY FICTION with RONOVAN WRITES Prompt Challenge #13 Judy and John – The Cave, Not So Safe After All

FRIDAY FICTION with RONOVAN WRITES Prompt Challenge #13 Judy and John – The Cave, Not So Safe After All

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Part 1 is John and Judy.

Part 2 is The Honeymoon

Part 3 is The Flight

Part 4 is The Hospital Under Siege

Part 5 is Love me Tender

Part 6 is Thanksgiving Dinner

Part 7 is The Newborn

Part 8 is Recovery From Birth

Part 9  is The Lesson

Part 10 is Surprise

Part 11 is “Teenage Lobotomy” by the Ramones

Part 12 is The Cave Safe Zone

Part 13 is The Cave – Not So Safe After All

“Judy and John – The Cave – Not So Safe After All”

By Teresa Smeigh February 2016

The pilot started to groan and move around. Gina took her eye briefly off the man they had just captured. She had two things on her mind, what to do with the pilot and what to do with the bad guy. She set Warrior to watch the bad guy struggling to get loose with the order to “kill” if he got loose. He had no idea the danger he was in from the dog. The dog was trained to kill and to use hand signals.

Gina told the girls to arm themselves and watch the area around the entrance. She started to quietly talk to the pilot and find out what was wrong with him. Hopefully he knew something. “I don’t remember much,” he told her quietly. “I vaguely remember the crash and now I have pain in my arm.”

From Gina’s perspective it looked badly broken. All she could do is re-splint it and break open one of these cases and get him something to help with the pain. She didn’t want to give him drugs since she didn’t know what they were, but the alcohol was probably the stuff they gave the guys yesterday and they all partied till they passed out. Passing out would be the best thing for him at this point.

Just then there was a warning growl, but the stupid guy didn’t take heed and Warrior did what he had been ordered to. When the guy was dead the girls grabbed their bras. Not to wear, no way, just to keep in case they needed them again to tie someone up.

Gina broke open a barrel and found something to give the pilot a drink. He drank enough to pass out and was one less problem for the girls.

What if someone comes looking for him, passed through Gina’s mind.

One was no problem for the three of them and Warrior, but more than one could be a definite problem. If they see their buddy all torn up they might go for Warrior. Gina thought it best to keep him in the back of the barrels and quiet just out enough to see her hand signals.

“Someone is coming,” Judy said. Not in sight yet though. I can hear him cursing up a storm, but not understand him and would presume he is not one of ours though. The girls all backed up out of sight. He entered and went right for the bras hanging there and got all excited.

He turned around to find three guns pointed at him. He dropped the bras.

Again the girls went through their routine, but tied the bras tighter around the guys wrists and legs and Gina set the dog on him with the same orders. Kill if he gets loose.

Gina turned to the girls I must find John and the crew. Watch the pilot. If he wakes up, give him some more wine. Watch this guy and well you know what happens if he gets loose and if someone else shows up just shoot the guy. One shot in the leg to stop him and three to let me know you are in danger.

“I’ll be back!”


 Constructive Criticism welcome!


About Tessa

My name is Tessa Dean and I am an author and blogger. My writing styles vary and I love writing using prompts. I am also writing my first book, a Memoir entitled "Government Property - A Memoir of a Military Wife".  This is being published on the blog rather than the traditional way. I am putting up chapters as I go along. I keep my blog filled with useful content, stories, and poems. Plenty to keep you busy. I have also been interviewed by blogs and had other posts published on many different blogs. I also wrote a series of articles on Bipolar Disorder for IBPF (International Bipolar Foundation). I am in my 60’s and disabled which allows me plenty of time to write to my heart’s content. I live in southern New Jersey and have 3 children and 5 grandchildren. My oldest grandchild is a Sargent in the United States Marine Corps.
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4 Responses to FRIDAY FICTION with RONOVAN WRITES Prompt Challenge #13 Judy and John – The Cave, Not So Safe After All

  1. Pingback: For those following my Judy and John series, another part is out – #13 | Advocate for Mental Illness

  2. Ronovan says:

    Pretty good entry this week. 🙂 The pacing wasn’t too fast.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Pingback: Friday Fiction with Ronovan Writes Prompt #13 Entries: THE #LINKS | ronovanwrites

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