Copyright-Rich Voza
“We’ll go in a few minutes. Relax, Dorrie.”
John asks for the check and they head back to work. Entering the door they find the guard tied up and gagged.
John rips the tape off . ”Gunmen, 4 of them, came in and went into your parents’ office. Then I heard a few screams and a few pops. They’re gone now! No one else was in the building.”
“Call 9-1-1!”
“Dorrie stay here. Wait for the cops.”
John heads down the corridor to his parents’ office and carefully opens the door. Definitely dead. Shot right between the eyes just as he had ordered.
Tessa
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About Tessa
Teresa (Tessa) Smeigh is now in her 60's and still going strong despite her disabilities affecting both physical and mental abilities. She has bipolar disorder (mental), Fibromyalgia (nerves), degenerative disc disease (spine), and arthritis (joints).
Despite that she is active in Mental Health Advocating, writing for www.IBPF.org (volunteer for non-profit) and has 5 blog posts already published by them. She is also working on 2 fiction books (mysteries). She keeps her blog filled with useful content, daily devotionals (She is a Christian), stories and poems. Plenty to keep you busy. She has also been interviewed by blogs and had other posts published on many different blogs.
She has 3 blogs so far http://www.tessacandoit.com and http://www.finallyawriter.com and http://www.sunnythoughtsandprayers.wordpress.com
She is from Deptford, NJ. Her family and blogs keep her busy.
Wow!
Very well done!
I love the way you managed to drop in a twist at the very end. Very good. (Not that I approve of killing one’s parents! 🙂 )
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Thank you Abraham. My parents are still alive at 78 and 80. I don’t approve of killing one’s parents either, part my character wanted the business and HIS parents were in the way. And I love twists!
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Oh my gosh – what a jerk! I hope it all gets traced back to him.
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Maybe it will, maybe it won’t. I don’t know if I will do anything else with this one or not. Thanks for stopping by!
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Oh, WOW, most certainly wasn’t expecting that!! Bloody good story, 10/10!! 😀
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Thank you Imogen! I love twists in my stories!
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Love being someone’s inspiration! Thank you for the mention!
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Thank you for the story! 🙂
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🙂
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