Dashing Through The Snow

Darren dashed across the yard and headed for the trees. The snow was falling rapidly. He slowed to catch his breath.

He could hear his name being screamed. Not too far away. He had to start moving again.

The trees are thicker. He could hear his pursuer crashing through the underbrush behind him.

He found a large tree and stepped behind it pressing himself flat.

“Gotcha!” His big brother grabbed his arm, yanked him out and punched him in the face.

“How many times do I have to tell you to leave my models alone? You broke it!”




About Tessa

Teresa (Tessa) Smeigh is now in her 60's and still going strong despite her disabilities affecting both physical and mental abilities. She has bipolar disorder (mental), Fibromyalgia (nerves), degenerative disc disease (spine), and arthritis (joints). Despite that she is active in Mental Health Advocating, writing for www.IBPF.org (volunteer for non-profit) and has 5 blog posts already published by them. She is also working on 2 fiction books (mysteries). She keeps her blog filled with useful content, daily devotionals (She is a Christian), stories and poems. Plenty to keep you busy. She has also been interviewed by blogs and had other posts published on many different blogs. She has 3 blogs so far http://www.tessacandoit.com and http://www.finallyawriter.com and http://www.sunnythoughtsandprayers.wordpress.com She is from Deptford, NJ. Her family and blogs keep her busy.
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9 Responses to Dashing Through The Snow

  1. Tara R. says:

    Ah… the joys of sibling rivalry.


  2. jannatwrites says:

    This sounds like my kids. I oughta just get them boxing gear for Christmas and let them duke it out 🙂


  3. Kir Piccini says:

    I can see this when the boys are older (if I let them out of the house)
    I thought HUNGER GAMES and then, oh yes, don’t touch my barbies..or models or STUFF.



  4. deanabo says:

    This took me back to my childhood fights with my sister. Well done.


  5. Susan Langer says:

    Good twist at the end. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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