Three Word Wednesday 489 – Shadorma

3wordwednesdayFatal Flaw by Teresa Smeigh July 2016

Gaping hole

Is a fatal flaw.

The cutter

Sings in a

Harmonious way while he

Harshly hacks away.


Teresa (Tessa) Dean Smeigh

-Advocate For Mental And Invisible Illnesses

-Author Of Articles, Stories And Poems

About Tessa

My name is Tessa Dean and I am an author and blogger. My writing styles vary and I love writing using prompts. I am also writing my first book, a Memoir entitled "Government Property - A Memoir of a Military Wife".  This is being published on the blog rather than the traditional way. I am putting up chapters as I go along. I keep my blog filled with useful content, stories, and poems. Plenty to keep you busy. I have also been interviewed by blogs and had other posts published on many different blogs. I also wrote a series of articles on Bipolar Disorder for IBPF (International Bipolar Foundation). I am in my 60’s and disabled which allows me plenty of time to write to my heart’s content. I live in southern New Jersey and have 3 children and 5 grandchildren. My oldest grandchild is a Sargent in the United States Marine Corps.
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11 Responses to Three Word Wednesday 489 – Shadorma

  1. Bethanyk says:

    Very good. Very intense!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Izrael says:

    I felt that the gaping hole describes a person who felt empty inside while still wanting to fill it in with emotions so that he would not feel so vast. It’s just my perspective though. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Harmonious way while he
    Harshly hacks away.

    It is a way of making it less of a chore to work on. It is being considerate to oneself so as not to tire oneself!


    Liked by 1 person

  4. Creates a lot of images in a few words.

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